This is what I presented at the critique. My project received positive feedback which i’m thrilled about. A few suggestions were made such as changing the illustration of the head as you wouldn’t know if it’s the front or back. I completely agree with this feedback, I was hoping that I would get some advice on the shape of the head as I knew it wasn’t right. Another suggestion was to make more screens, this was something I intended to do anyway after the critique as it was still a working progress. Overall, I’m so happy with how this critique went and i’m more than happy to make changes in order to improve my project.
Comments I received from my classmates